Sunday, September 23, 2018

Second memory storyboards

This is what I presented to the crew for critiques before class. Overall, they really liked them (and I did too) but there were some changes to be made.









The feedback from the crew was to get rid of the bird tugging part and just have the dove follow Sal down the hallway. Also the mom swiping the drawing looked a bit awkward as well.

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